Not -
The beach was crowded with little kids. Playing with their kites.
The marathon was a success. Seeing participation from people all over the country.
Instead -
The beach was crowded with little kids, playing with their kites.
The marathon was a success, seeing participation from people all over the country.
You can use it to stress on expression though.
She moved into the darkness. Swiftly.
The beach was crowded with little kids. Playing with their kites.
The marathon was a success. Seeing participation from people all over the country.
Instead -
The beach was crowded with little kids, playing with their kites.
The marathon was a success, seeing participation from people all over the country.
You can use it to stress on expression though.
She moved into the darkness. Swiftly.
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