Monday, 28 January 2013

#6 Using period inappropriately

Not -

The beach was crowded with little kids. Playing with their kites. 
The marathon was a success. Seeing participation from people all over the country. 

Instead -

The beach was crowded with little kids, playing with their kites. 
The marathon was a success, seeing participation from people all over the country. 

You can use it to stress on expression though.

She moved into the darkness. Swiftly. 

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